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Post by princesskira16 on May 20, 2008 21:14:57 GMT
Name:Narijma Age:30 Height:6'0" Build: Normal Power: *crow eyes- able to look through a crows eyes *Shadow teleportation - the ability to travel to travel through shadows and pop up in different places *healing- is able to heal a wound or even from the brink of death can only heal non mortals thou can not heal mortals Looks: History: As a young girl she was taken to the dragon feild to pick her very first dragon by her uncle. as she was in the field she saw a young crow demon who she liked but never told. when she got older her father tried to kill her. when she became 28 she married drax the demon she fell in love with as a young girl.she had 5 chikdren but were kiled by the royal army. she was thrown through a portal by her eldest daughter and has no cluer where her husband is or if her kids are still alive. she is in search of her husband and now has met up with her old friend kira who is in search of her bf vampiro Race: Demon Friends: Vampiro,Scarecrow,Kira,Drax (husband who thinks shes dead) Weapons: Benkoutsou claymore Kamenyo baketsou (really long sword) throwing knives- tips have snake venom on them
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Post by Dae on May 21, 2008 16:08:25 GMT
Before I approve this profile, I need to know something.
About her first power: can she summon dragons just like that, out of the blue, or simply force existing ones to obey her?
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Post by Konrad on May 21, 2008 16:56:44 GMT
Oh and also, we already ahve a race known as the dragon-kin, who basically rule, and are, dragons. Your powers involving dragons will be limited in reference.
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Post by princesskira16 on May 21, 2008 17:41:23 GMT
yes her first power just summons them she has no control of the dragons will or powers also she will usually only summon a dragon if her life is in danger which will usualy be the only reasons she would summon them
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Post by Dae on May 21, 2008 21:25:58 GMT
Dragons are powerful entities, intelligent, wise, ancient, and terribly, terribly strong. I fear you'll have to limit your summoning ability to smaller dragons for now. When you increase in level, then you can invoke stronger and stronger Dragons. But not as a Lvl 1 power.
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Post by Mairin on May 21, 2008 21:34:00 GMT
As far as I know, I may be wriong, but only admins can approve a character profile
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Post by princesskira16 on May 21, 2008 21:37:17 GMT
i thought it was staff in general
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Post by Mairin on May 21, 2008 21:53:29 GMT
It may stay staff in the character template(which I will change), but it is only admins who may approve of characters.
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Post by Mairin on May 21, 2008 21:54:28 GMT
I do not approve because your first power is way too powerful.
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Post by princesskira16 on May 21, 2008 22:02:46 GMT
ok ill change it then
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Post by Mairin on May 21, 2008 22:37:08 GMT
What is natural strength? ?
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Post by vamprio on May 21, 2008 22:42:55 GMT
Mairin look again please
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Post by Mairin on May 21, 2008 22:53:37 GMT
you know, you dont have to make all your powers at once. Natural strength doesn't make sense to me since we all have it; it is a given.
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Post by Bogdan on May 21, 2008 22:55:41 GMT
What Mairin is trying to say, is could you please make Natural Strength a little more clear. Strength that is given at birth is vague.
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Post by Mairin on May 21, 2008 22:58:38 GMT
lol no i meant what i said. unless you are unnaturally strong then you dont have to list it as a power because it is something we all have.
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