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Nekoin
Aug 15, 2008 11:53:46 GMT
Post by nekoin on Aug 15, 2008 11:53:46 GMT
Name: Nekoin Age: 15 Height: 164cm Build: Skinny, slight. Power: Mind reading (Mockra) Looks: History: When she was 11 her parents were killed by assasins, she was taken into care by an ex-mercenary. She quickly learned how to fight emotionlessly and to the death. She started working as a mercenary at the age of 14, but never forgot her parents murder, so when her fighting skills were finally good enough she set out to hunt down her parent's killers. This how freezing and tired she wanders into a city that wasn't on any map. Race: Human Friends: Zane Owly, Kairi Reaper Weapons: Whip, named Gweithred caniedydd or Deed singer in english. Note: She is Welsh so often speaks in it.
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Trygon
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Nekoin
Aug 15, 2008 20:47:27 GMT
Post by Trygon on Aug 15, 2008 20:47:27 GMT
For what reason were her parents killed by assassins. Why did the ex-mercenary take her in. Why is he a ex-mercenary in the first place. What was his name. Tell us about him. Why would he allow her to start working in a dangerous business so early. Are there any leads on the assassins in Blood City? Any middle or surname?
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Nekoin
Aug 16, 2008 9:41:08 GMT
Post by nekoin on Aug 16, 2008 9:41:08 GMT
Picky. But I suppose that history was a bit short. Fine, her parents were in a rather dubious illegal fire-ams trade, and made the mistake of making enemies with the wrong client. Nekoin, as she was just a kid, was kept out of her parents buissness and dealings. Because of this she wasn't assasinated with her parents, but also it means that she isn't sure who her parents killers were. From some old papers (note: papers in this case discribe documents recording a little of Nekoins parent's dealing, so not papers as in the Daily Telegraph) she learnt about Blood city, and so suspects her parents had clients in it, mainly gangs. When, her parents were killed, her Uncle took her in. He had been a mercenary but had been badly injured in a fight, meaning he had to retire early. When he heard that her parents had been assasinated he was worried for Nekoin (second name Ayres) so started to train her to fight and protect herself. She was a quick learner so easily picked up the basics and so her Uncle, though he wasn't happy about it (he was worried as she was very young), taught her how to fight as a mercenary. Nekoin had promised her parents that she'd avenge their deaths and so trained hard to become a strong fighter. She left her Uncle's house (without telling him she was going) and began investigating her parents death. She also, as she was a good fighter, started working as a mercenary and improving her fighting skills. She had learnt little from her parent's documents, but enough to assume that Blood city was a real place. If it wasn't then the hunt for her parent's killers had come to nothing. So she set out to find it as if it was the only place she had a hope of finding the assasins in.
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Zane Owly
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ROCKEN' IT IN UNI!!!! It's nice to be 18.
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Nekoin
Aug 16, 2008 17:42:54 GMT
Post by Zane Owly on Aug 16, 2008 17:42:54 GMT
No offence but two points: 1. Blood City isn't in any newspapers because its existence is not know to the vast majority of the human public. 2. My character, Zane, only found out about the city when she arrived their by accident. Note: Look up characters before posting or mentioning them.
Sorry for this.
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Nekoin
Aug 16, 2008 19:23:30 GMT
Post by nekoin on Aug 16, 2008 19:23:30 GMT
1. Papers can discribe any document printed on the writing material that is sourced from trees. The papers actually refered to documents that recorded a little of Nekoin's parents dealings. 2. Yes, fine, I have corrected the all too obvious mistake about your character.
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Nekoin
Aug 16, 2008 22:37:28 GMT
Post by Trygon on Aug 16, 2008 22:37:28 GMT
If the papers came from her parents and not a human company I approve of this. No one outside of Blood City that does not know about abhumans, Supernatural Beings and the shidazzaling lot of it knows about Blood City.
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